Luxi Luxi, Gloom Digger

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Luxi Luxi, Gloom Digger

Post by Dark_Humor » Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:56 pm

Luxi Luxi
Gloom Digger
Primary: Strength
Model: Kobold Model
Side: Bane of Enternity
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Back Story
A very depressing story for Luxi, he lived in a graceful time, his parents being the Cheiftans of his Gloom Tribe.
The crimson apples were sweet, and the green vegetables were fresh.
Humans moved in, the Glooms treated them with toys, and food, the humans accepted these preasents.
Luxi made friends with a young human girl, always playing outside...

Fire arose, the humans were throwing torches onto the Glooms.
Burning them alive.
Luxi was forced into a deep hole, where he was buried by his parents.
His parents grabbed a sword, a shield, the weapons the humans made for them.
Fighting with their lives, dieing.
Luxi saw his parents, his friends, all die.
It was all over, Luxi came out of the pile of rocks, looking around for survivors.
Luxi looked, and looked, untill a human, with a musket, was going to shoot him.
The human missed, then Luxi ran towards the human, grabbing a rock, and smashing it onto the human's knee.
Knocking the man over, Luxi bashing the rock into the man's skull, over and over, 'till there was nothing but a bloody mess.
Luxi was scared, he ran away, running, and running, untill the young girl who he was friends with, found him.
The girl hid Luxi in her barn, giving him food every day, Luxi was happy.
Untill, the girl ran into the barn, opening the door, yelling, "Ru-" Then being shot in the back.
Other humans were raiding the farm, burning everything.
Luxi looked around, and grabbed the shovel that once belonged to the dead girl.
He ran away, knowing that it was all over.

Many years later, Luxi rested on top of a cliff, holding the shovel up and high, with pride.
A creature walked up to Luxi, speaking in a very deep voice, "I sense anger in you, rage,"
Luxi just looked and stared at the horrific creature, "You want to kill the humans who burned everyone you knew alive,"
Luxi just nodded slowly, scared, "Come with me, and I will grant you that wish,"
Luxi slowly rose, walking with the creature, not knowing what to do, but he was sure, that he will get his revenge back.
Luxi said with his childish voice, "Humans are evil,"

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Skills
Shock Wave - Self Point AoE Damage & Stun
"Yummy worm live ground!" Luxi picking a small, greenish worm up, eating it.
"Yummy, yummy! Me want more!" Luxi hitting the ground with his shovel, making a ripple.
Worms flying up into the sky, then falling back down, "Yay!" Luxi said with happiness.

- Luxi quickly digs into the ground, shaking the ground, and throwing rocks out, dealing X(Moderate) damage, and stunning hit units for Y(Moderate) seconds. Luxi will not be shown if he is under the effect of, 'Dig.'

Dig - Self Point Hide & Bonus HP Regen
"My home very clean," Luxi pointing towards the Dirt Ground.
"Human house dirty!" Luxi pointing at a human house.
"Human no dirt on ground, shining, yucky!" Luxi digging himself a hole for him to sleep in.

- Luxi digs into the ground, making him unable to attack, but can still cast spells, get a bonus X(Moderate) HP regen, and becoming invisible, but Luxi cannot gain any allied bonuses, and when he takes damage from a enemy attack or spell, he will be dealt a bonus 50% damage. When Luxi comes out of the ground, he ripples the ground, dealing Y(Very Low), and stunning hit units for Z(Very Low) seconds.

Tunnel - Targeted Point Teleport & Damage
"Big, scary spider live in cave," Luxi said as his mining group went deeper into the cave.
A loud roar was heard, "Ah!" Luxi quickly digged a hole into the ground.
Jumping threw it, leaving his fellow mates to be Spider Food.

- Luxi jumps into the ground, making a tunnel at a target point, teleporting him, and sending a wave of spikes as he goes, dealing X damage, and stunning hit units for Y seconds. Luxi does not jump out of the ground when he reaches the spot if he in under the effect of, 'Dig.'

Elite: Gloom Shrooms - Self Point Healing Herb & Heavy AoE Damage
In the Gloom Village, many Shrooms grew.
All of the shrooms, used for herbs, or just to eat.
But the Glooms had to take care of these Shrooms, because, if you make the Shrooms mad, they will explode.

- Luxi plants a seed at his target location, which will take 10/8/6 seconds to grow into a mushroom, which can be eaten by a allied unit to heal them by X(Moderate) HP after Y(20ish?) seconds, or the mushroom will explode when ever a enemy goes near it, dealing Z(Heavy) damage. The mushrooms last A seconds, and with every B seconds, the muchsrooms will decay, making them heal and deal C% less. The shrooms are visible, but Luxi will still be hidden if he is under the effect of 'Dig.'

Utimate: Rage - Channels AoE Damage
"Humans kill friend and family!" Luxi hitting his shovel onto the ground.
"Why they happy, and not me?!" Luxi now making a deep pit.
"Humans are selfish! They only care selves, no one else!" As a human soldier ran towards Luxi, he fell into the pit.

- Luxi digs under ground, pulling as many enemies as he can with him, making the pulled units unable to do anything for X(Incredibly Long) seconds, and also dealing Y(Massive) damage per second for each second they are underground, and if a enemy building is in the storm, it will make the building unable to do anything (Like, if you use this on a barracks, it will make the barrack unable to spawn units) , and also dealing Z(Freaking Insane) damage per second. Luxi will not be shown channeling this spell if he is under the effect of, 'Dig.'
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Comments:

Shock Wave - Average AoE Spell, good for, well, stunning.
Dig - Luxi's main spell, made it more fair, so, if you are very smart with a AoE Caster, you can easily kill him.
Tunnel - Used to move around, and also stunning enemies in the path.
Gloom Shrooms - Random Ability... But it is suppose to work like Janise's Will 'o' Wisp, putting it in tight spaces, incase the enemy hero you are trying to kill is running away, or if you wanna heal a allied hero.
Rage - Good for slowing units, and dealing damage, but this spell was suppose to be a anti-building utimate, and will be uber rigged if you do use it right in the middle of a group of towers.
Last edited by Dark_Humor on Tue Mar 10, 2009 4:58 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Luxi Luxi, Gloom Digger

Post by SetaSoujirou » Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:25 pm

I don't get how digging, forests, and volcanoes come together as a workable idea but to the point.
It's not necessary to give every skill a stun (or aerial shackle-esque).
It also seems lame to just sit away and cast skills underground.
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Re: Luxi Luxi, Gloom Digger

Post by Vinnam » Tue Mar 10, 2009 3:23 pm

Why does his grammar take a quantum leap during his Ultimate?
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