Careev, The Blistering Edge

[Intoxicated Crayon]

Careev/Cinder
The Blistering Edge/The Unquenched Flame
Agility; Bane (A Purty Demon Hunter with flames or some other fiery charred barbecue dude)

Story; Burn Baby Burn! Disco Inferno! Burn Baby Burn!

Level 1 Skill: – Condition Cause and AoE
Thermal Expansion

• Cinder touches a foe with his burning palms setting them ablaze for X seconds. If the foe dies while suffering from burn caused by this skill, it explodes in a bloody and fiery mess dealing Y damage.

Level 1 Skill: – Active Cast
Scorching Blades

• Cinder tosses a fiery discus at a foe. The discus will travel X range before returning to Cinder. Each foe hit by the disc is dealt Y damage. The original target is dealt double of Y.

Level 1 Skill: - Active Passive
Overheat

• Whenever Cinder attacks a burning foe with this active he will give them ruin for X seconds. When this is active, Cinder will suffer from a permanent burn.

Level 6 Ultimate: – AoE Channel and Death
Blazing Sun

• Cinder channels for a moment and superheats the air around him and takes the form of a living sun. He becomes immobile as he hovers and periodically releases waves of heat; each dealing X damage and burning foes for 3 seconds. After Y waves, Cinder explodes in a final wave dealing Z damage and burning foes for 6 seconds. All Foes within range of Cinder while he is taking the form of a sun is burned.

Extra Skill: - Stun and Conditional Effect
Obstruct

• Cinder fires a burst of sand on a foe stunning them for a second and blinding them for X seconds. If the foe receives burn while suffering from blind caused by this skill, their blind duration is ended and they are stunned and immobile in a glass tomb. If the target receives Y attacks while in the tombs, it explodes dealing small aoe damage, damaging the target and ruining it. If the tomb exists for 5 seconds, it shatters prematurely and deals no damage. (This skill can replace the 2nd skill-- I prefer this skill)

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[TargetPractice]

This hero is awesome! Except Demon Hunter model will NOT work, possibly because DoE has alot of KB, and this would require a second import and skin, this takes more KB than is needed

Another model that has not been used would be better

And I don't care if no one agrees with me

[pandamanana]

No offence, but I really see no significant synergies here other than the obvious burn + passive = ruin
This seems like an abomination of mashed up fire abilties that really make little sense together. The ultimate seems very Ascension-'ish which is always a bonus for me, but probably not needed in DoE.

For Obstruct, why not just give it health instead of counting the attacks... much easier and it makes more sense...

[Deschain]

Level 1 Skill: – Condition Cause and AoE
Thermal Expansion

• Cinder touches a foe with his burning palms setting them ablaze for X seconds. If the foe dies while suffering from burn caused by this skill, it explodes in a bloody and fiery mess dealing Y damage.

Level 6 Ultimate: – AoE Channel and Death
Blazing Sun

• Cinder channels for a moment and superheats the air around him and takes the form of a living sun. He becomes immobile as he hovers and periodically releases waves of heat; each dealing X damage and burning foes for 3 seconds. After Y waves, Cinder explodes in a final wave dealing Z damage and burning foes for 6 seconds. All Foes within range of Cinder while he is taking the form of a sun is burned.

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Wow this is amazing. I really love your hero but shouldn't first skill cause bleed since they die in a bloody mess?

Also does channeling blazing sun always kills you or when you complete channeling it.

I think your second skill should be replaced with the extra I like it more somehow (reminds me of LFG comic when they make glass dragons).

[Oxygen]

The first active and ultimate are quite cool, but the two other are extreme fillers, and I see no real synergy here