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Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:48 pm
by MartyrOfSorrow
Lady Diatrett
Khamsin Glass Maiden
Agi/Int(melle), The Hallowed Order.
Naga Siren model.

Story

Passive: Moltenglass Blade
Aura.
Diatrett has a X% to burn/blind a enemy when attack. If enemy around gain blind and burn d'buffs she cover it in a Glass Prison. In Glass Prison unit cant move has a increase armor and low a time of all conditions on it for Y%(or only burn/blind). Works with ally units. Prison is on unit before blind and burn is on unit.

Level 1 Skill: Shards Gale
AOE damage, bleed.
Create a storm of glass shards on aoe. Storm deals X damage to a units in aoe, cause bleed for Y1 sec. Deals x2 damage to prisoned unit and destroy Glass Prison, if it was a ally, destroy prison and cause bleed for Y2 sec.(Also it can delete a blind and burn condition)
Has a average small CD.

Level 1 Skill: Khamsin Breath
AOE debuff.
Casts on unit in center of aoe. If a target has burn condition, send a fire wave that cause a burn to all units around for X sec. If target has blind - sand wave that cause blind to all units around for X sec. If target has blind and burn, cause a double-type wave for X sec. Also works with ally units.

Level 1 Skill: Leadglass Skin
Self-buff.
Cause a Diatrett to burn and blind(Cause a Glass Prison on she) on X sec. Additionaly increase armor on Y, on Z sec.

Level 6 Skill: Unbreakable Will
Self-buff, AOE debuff.
Cause all surounding enemy unit to blind and burn for X sec. For Y sec(small) Glass Maiden has a special buff - when she use a Shards Gale, spell dont destroy the Glass Prison debuff.

If you find a mistakes, dont angry for me, im not good know english))

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:04 pm
by Loki
Biggest problem here is forced synergy.

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:07 pm
by MartyrOfSorrow
You think?
Aura creat a Cage you only cast Glass Crush. Breath also can be AOE on distant...better than line))
I used to play heroes like this...check a something nad cast...wait wait and cast)))Like wery strange and difficult)

But the idea you dont bad isnt it?) Sand and fire create a glass, and also it a 3d khamsin in command)))

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:18 pm
by Loki
Without moltenglass blade, glass crush is useless.
Without glass crush, her ultimate is useless.
So what happens when you get glass crush without moltenglass blade? Absolutely nothing.
This is what I mean by forced synergy.

By the way, use the edit button instead of double posting.

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 6:25 pm
by MartyrOfSorrow
Maybe add some second other effect to spell?...I can think about this...its not a problem to add some effect that dont need a burn or blind or glass cage...or Moltenglass Blade will be like passive that dont need learn.
By the way, use the edit button instead of double posting.
sorry)

I edit a spell-list...better than was)

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:29 pm
by Rising_Dusk
If we didn't already have Glasse, the idea of a glass hero could be really cool. Otherwise, it is as Loki said, it's just too forced. It's neither elegant nor smooth, and it's all "Do X, then Y, then Z, or you fail." That's just no good. :cry:

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:33 pm
by MartyrOfSorrow
But i check a skills...now it dont need to condition...i think
But I am glad that you liked the theme of Glass))

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:35 pm
by Deschain
Wait a minute Glasse isn't a glass hero (unless you mean like glass cannon). He is a light hero/illusionist.

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:07 pm
by Rising_Dusk
Yeah, but having a hero named Glasse sort of precludes having a hero "X, the Glass Y" just on principle. It'd feel weird having the both in the map at once. Also, I am quite sure that I know what Glasse' theme is already. ;)

Re: Khamsin Glass Maiden, Diatrett

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:07 pm
by Deschain
Yeah, but for a moment there...

I should stop eating the funny mushrooms.