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Avenger
Aglilty; The Bane of Eternity

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Deep breathing. It was from all around.

We were in a dark cave. That dark cave.

Then, he bled, more. Not in trickles but in spurts. Not in drops but in cups.

He could not even scream. Silence had killed him.

I was covered in crimson red. The red I would not forget.

He, rather, it came down. They came down.

And I ran.

I ran.

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Level 1 Skill:
Bloodwell (Active)

• The target unit Bleeds for X seconds. It will also take Y damage per second and nearby allies are healed for Y health. If the unit dies under the effect of Bloodwell, a Fallen is spawned. Lasts until the unit stops Bleeding.

Level 1 Skill:
Curse of Blood (Toggeable Passive)

• Whilst active, extends Bleed onto youself for X seconds. Every Y seconds, a Fallen is spawned with Z% of the health you have lost within the last Y seconds

Level 1 Skill:
Sacrifice (Active)

• Kills the target allied unit to give nearby units X% additional damage for Z seconds. Stacks. If that unit was bleeding, extend Bleed onto all nearby units (enemies and allies alike) for Y seconds.

Level 6 Ultimate
Red Plague

• Nearby allies attack X% faster for each Bleeding unit near the Avenger.

Spawn Info
Fallen

• Health: 400
  Mana: 0
  Movement Speed: 230~310
  Attack: 12-18 (1.3s)
  Ablilties: Bleedout [Passive] (Extends Bleed onto this unit every second), Feast [Passive] (Drains X health on each attack)

That should be the average, or so stats of the Fallen.

His title makes him sound like he should be in a marvel comic book or something.

=d I initially started with Fallen, but I wanted to use it for his spawns so it would be awkward to call him Fallen and his spawns fallen.

So it become Red Plague, but it sounded weird for a hero title. Which eventually became Crimson Avenger. X_X

I'll see what I can do about the title.

Edit: Oh I just remembered, I suddenly developed a dis-liking for Blood Transfusion. I mean yea, it works but something is lacking.

I had several ideas for replacement but I have no idea which to implment.

Level 1 Skill:
Blood Frenzy (Preperation Buff)

• The target unit gains X damage, but takes X damage when attacking, on it's next Y attacks.

Level 1 Skil:
Bloodflow (Active)

• Teleports to the target Bleeding unit, and extends Bleed for X seconds onto nearby enemies.

Level 1 Skill:
Sacrfice (Active)

• The target Fallen gains X health per second. If a Fallen reaches full health, it explodes dealing Y physical damage and inflicting Ruin and Cripple onto nearby enemies for Z seconds

Level 1 Skill:
Split (Active)

• The target Fallen is killed and nearby enemies have Bleed extended onto them for X seconds. A pair of Fallen are spawned in place of the sacrificed Fallen, with 50% of the targetted Fallen's health each.

Level 1 Skill:
Blood Rage (Passive)

• You and your Fallen deal X% of their current health as physical damage on attacking. Fallens have Y additional max health.

I know this is kinda random, but I geuss there's no harm in a suggestion :

Level 1 Skill:
???(Passive Aura)

Every time a unit has bleed applied or extended on it around the hero it has an X percent chance to take Y damage and/or spawn a fallen spawn.

Bleh, I dont know, seems like your overdoing it a bit on all the blood though o_O And when you say

Level 1 Skill:
Curse of Blood (Toggeable Passive)
Whilst active, extends Bleed onto youself for X seconds. Every Y seconds, a Fallen is spawned with Z% of the health you have lost within the last Y seconds

You mean it'll have a certain amount of its total health, not it's max health at that value right?

Like we need another corpse consuming hero on Bane. Geno, Vela, Meridia are enough.

Huh?

He has no skills that need a corpse. Unless you're talking about the original idea of Feast which I scrapped in place for a Lifestealing attack =d.

Curse of Blood: For instance, Z% = 100%, then if you have lost 200 health in the last Y seconds, it will be spawned with 200 health.

If you lost 500 health in the last Y seconds (Z% = 100%), it will be spawned with 400 health. (because it's maximum health)

He is a bloody hero =/.

I don't think having 2 Passives and 1 Toggleable skill is appropriate on any single hero though.

Edit: I almost forgot. I replaced Blood Transfusion with this.

Level 1 Skill:
Sacrifice (Active)

• Kills the target allied unit to give nearby units X% additional damage. Stacks. If that unit was bleeding, extend Bleed onto all nearby units (enemies and allies alike) for Y seconds.

As opposed to creating your remade skills as a new post, try using the edit button.

Already did. Just posted it so it's easier to see, rather than having to scroll all the way up.

*posts for the sake of raising the counter*
Hell if I'm supposed to know what 'original feast' means.

<_<

Removing that from the original post for the sake of reducing confusion.

*edits*