Nephalem, Lightning Summoner

[Deschain]

Nephalem
Lightning Summoner
INT; Bane. Model Cenarius.


Level 1 Skill:
Shock

• Autocast attack. Deals X magical damage to adjacent unit.
  If target has less mana then you, it is ruined for 4 seconds and you gain Y mana.

Level 1 Skill:
Overwhelming power

• Channeled AoE indicator. You steal X mana from foes within the affected area. Foes suffer from 3 seconds of cripple and maim. If at full mana instead of stealing you will deal 2*X magical damage.
  Relatively cheap with long cooldown.

Level 1 Skill:
Dark Glow

• Passive. Reduces magical damage dealt to you by X%. Whenever you deal magical damage to a foe suffering from a condition you gain Y mana.
  If you have more than 80% of your max mana pool, whenever you deal magical damage to a there is A% chance that foe will be stunned for 0.5 seconds.

Level 6 Ultimate:
Reap the Storm

• Active Point Blank Annihilation. When used you deplete all of your mana. Conjures a Storm that each second deals X physical damage to units in area and extend their existing conditions (except stun or knockdown) by 0.5 seconds. For each A mana initially depleted by this spell the Storm lasts one second.

EDIT:
Dark Glow counts any damage you deal this means your abilities return mana per each tick of damage done.

[Deschain]

*Zapps the thread*

[erwtenpeller]

I really like the basic idea of this. Thematically though it doesnt really seem to have any character.

[Deschain]

Any ideas how to fix that?

[LightburneR]

Any ideas how to fix that?

The easiest way to start is with a Story.

Then change the names of the skills to suit the story.

Add little details to the skills that suit his character, like "Nephalem is a master of lightning and blah" or something.

I believe Overwhelming Power is a mana drain per second and a conditional dps, am I correct to assume?

[Rising_Dusk]

Story has nothing to do with it. You need to bleed personality with your skills, otherwise no amount of story can turn your hero into a character.