Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

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Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by 2-P » Wed Jan 21, 2009 4:50 pm

Angst
Paranoid Schizophrenic
Intelligence; Hallowed Order.


Story;
"I saw them in my dreams.
They came for me!
THEY CAME FOR ME!"


Level 1 Skill:
Plan B
  • AoE Target
    Creates an invisible mark at the target location. 4 seconds afterwards, Angst will teleport to the mark, dealing X damage and causing all conditions he currently suffers from for Y% of their original duration to nearby enemies.
Level 1 Skill:
Face Off
  • Target Unit Buff
    Extends cripple and ruin on Angst and the target enemy for 2 seconds every second, as long as they are within X range of each other. Lasts Y seconds.
Level 1 Skill:
Break Point
  • Passive
    Every time Angst suffers a condition, he turns invisible for the next X seconds.
Level 6 Ultimate:
Die Hard
  • Instant Cast AoE
    Damages and knocks down Angst and all nearby enemy units. Has no cooldown if more than X units are knocked down that way.

He started as a "fun hero" long ago, but when I had the idea for the ultimate, I thought that I should actually try to make something serious out of him. =P
At first I was trying to turn him into a hero that has to run away often or stay at a distance to the enemy, but giving him the possibility to turn around all of a sudden and go batshit on the chasing hero. But abilities that force yourself to stay on distance kinda suck. So I tried to fit the concept into a more player friendlier way. And well... here he is. oO
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by SetaSoujirou » Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:12 pm

Love the interaction between the level 1 skills. I dislike the ultimate though.
Good job overall.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by pandamanar » Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:24 pm

I actually really like this guy :3 if he was turned from a joke-hero to a serious-hero, he could actually work. My only problem is Die Hard and how it functions very similarly to Distruction. Also his first skill's mark should be visible to allies, but not enemies :3 Overall, I like it, congrats.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Rising_Dusk » Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:49 pm

Actually... This guy is awesome in every way except the lack of epic name/title. (Angst is too blunt and Paranoid Schizophrenic is too much for the BNet world to handle, be more suave in your approach) Exalted.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by TheDeathstalker » Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:57 pm

Rising_Dusk wrote:Actually... This guy is awesome in every way... Exalted.
I... er... what? Really? I mean, yeah, the rest seems cool, but Die Hard scares the crap out of me... but then again, I'm probably more deathly afraid of permastun than most...
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Oxygen » Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:12 pm

SetaSoujirou wrote:Love the interaction between the level 1 skills. I dislike the ultimate though.
Good job overall.
Yeah, I really fail to see, also, how it goes with the rest of the hero. Rest, which is, good though.

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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Phox » Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:34 pm

Does Break Point consider knock-down as a condition?

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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Rising_Dusk » Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:52 am

When I read it, I assumed so.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Phox » Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:35 am

Yeah, cuz if so, that's a pretty sweet combo he's got going on there.

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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Rising_Dusk » Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:29 am

Yeah the whole first skill, ult, teleport, ult combo really sets it off -- all the while tripping the passive. Good times.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by 2-P » Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:48 pm

Hm, the ult isn't very popular.
Yeah, I really fail to see, also, how it goes with the rest of the hero.
Thematic or spell synergy wise?
The ult is definitely more "aggressive" than the other spells. It's there because I wanted to give him some suicidal "no way out" spell, you know, the paranoid who doesn't see any chance to get out of a situation, so he just tries to take as many bad men with him as possible. So yeah, I guess it clashes with the other spells in that regard.
Die Hard scares the crap out of me... but then again, I'm probably more deathly afraid of permastun than most...
To be honest, I didn't care about it being too imba when I came up with it, I gave it to him because I think that it's a really cool spell. I know that it could get out of hand fast.
I see this whole hero suggestion thing more as a source of inspiration and not as a place for heroes that could be built-in 1:1 into the map.
Also his first skill's mark should be visible to allies, but not enemies :3
Oh yeah, that's what I meant. Hm, but I guess it's not clear in that case since it's not a unit.
Actually... This guy is awesome in every way except the lack of epic name/title. (Angst is too blunt and Paranoid Schizophrenic is too much for the BNet world to handle, be more suave in your approach) Exalted.
Yar, I suck with coming up with names. =/ I kinda like Angst, but just Angst on its own isn't enough. Maybe as second name? Paranoid Schizophrenic is stupid, yar. Definitely need to find a replacement for "Plan B" too. xD

Thanks, glad you liked it. ^^
Does Break Point consider knock-down as a condition?
Ya.


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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Rising_Dusk » Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:18 pm

He should be named something more clever or subtle, angst is too blunt a name for such a subtle hero.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Vinnam » Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:19 pm

I'm assuming Break Point is breakably invisible, otherwise having Boots of Blinding Speed makes Angst very dangerous.
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by Cooldood » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:12 am

Hahaha I think you should stick with Paranoid Schuzophrenic :P
Think Plan B is a cool name too. Somehow when I thought of this guy I pictured him as a strength hero o_O I'm geussing he'd be int and ranged though right?
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Re: Angst, Paranoid Schizophrenic

Post by LightburneR » Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:04 pm

Dusk said the title wouldn't fit into World Editor.

He's INT and I think he's more "melee"ish rather than ranged :P. Would be funny to see him ranged tho.
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