[44 Images Warning] DoE Story
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Can you rapidshare or mediafire the set or something like that, viewing 44 pictures online without being in a clickable series is unwieldy at best.
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Yeah, I kinda got annoyed having to scroll down from porn adds for each pic.
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The story was.. unimpressive. Still compared to what dota can mesh up it is probably far more coherent and intelligent story.
Also you need to work on your English a bit. I could detect few errors (and since I'm not as eloquent or grammatically correct as vesu or Kaome...) means your writing really sucks.
Also you need to work on your English a bit. I could detect few errors (and since I'm not as eloquent or grammatically correct as vesu or Kaome...) means your writing really sucks.
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xD
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I think he was drunk. People should show some restraint. <_<
Anyway, this was a pretty nice story, couple things however...
The player's text really distracted me, and messed with the suspension of belief.
I liked how you made note of the fact that the bane and order aren't really "good and evil", I think you should have focused on that a bit more.
Some of the sentences didn't really make sense, that was probably mis-translations or phrases that don't translate well though.
All in all, nice job. You managed to capture some pretty awesome scenes.
Anyway, this was a pretty nice story, couple things however...
The player's text really distracted me, and messed with the suspension of belief.
I liked how you made note of the fact that the bane and order aren't really "good and evil", I think you should have focused on that a bit more.
Some of the sentences didn't really make sense, that was probably mis-translations or phrases that don't translate well though.
All in all, nice job. You managed to capture some pretty awesome scenes.
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Yeah, I was going to use the present tenses in the first few scenes.
But I changed my mind and used many past tenses.
And I think my Thai translation was worse.
The story changed from serious to crazy.
But I changed my mind and used many past tenses.
And I think my Thai translation was worse.
The story changed from serious to crazy.
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For one screenshot, they like to type fast, lol.
Let's do what comes naturally
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Yeah, they really like to flood XD.Loki wrote:For one screenshot, they like to type fast, lol.
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Imagine if Kaome did this with his stories.
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It'd be orgasm.