A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

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Re: A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

Post by Hydrolisk » Sun Jan 04, 2009 6:25 am

Ah, I think I know what you speak of (too dramatic problem). One of my teachers once told me my essay was far too "in your face" and had too much "shock factor." Man, I can see this problem ALL across my life, no joke. See? I think I just did it again.

How could I go about fixing this though?...
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Re: A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

Post by VZhitogoroshi » Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:48 pm

Just write a short story. Five pages MAXIMUM. It should have a start, and an end, and it should have a theme and make a point. And - no violence. It's possible, trust me.

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Re: A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

Post by Hydrolisk » Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:35 am

I think a piece of my soul died when I read "no violence."

I can try, though. Let's see how this turns out...
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Re: A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

Post by Hydrolisk » Mon Feb 02, 2009 8:32 pm

Nope, never mind, Hito. I almost made it to no violence, but then I introduced the Warborgs. Otherwise, it would have been probably a lot cooler. The background "story" (fictional-history lesson) is violence-less though, so hooray!

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Updated with Si, a brilliant poem I was thinking about typing up a while now. Enjoy it, seriously! (Link.)
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Re: A Cajillion Thousand KM/H Things

Post by Hydrolisk » Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:43 pm

Updated with Peace is Deviation (link).

It's the backstory/plot of a StarCraft mod I'm working on with two other people.
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