An ode to Genobee

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Akruta
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An ode to Genobee

Post by Akruta » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:16 pm

Well in English We had to write an ode so I wrote one on Genobee its a bit dumb but I really don't care.

Flesh, Blood, Sinew & Bone
A work of art.
Killing the living
As a Bane to all life.
Mindless to its purpose
It serves its Master.
A ghastly abomination
That towers over the Battlefield
And fills its foes full of Dread.
The Bloodletter Gravemind Genobee.

There might bee a few errors so please point them out also sugesstions on how to better it are welcome.

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Re: An ode to Genobee

Post by Loki » Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:06 pm

Nothing tops Vert's.

"It writhes! IT WRITHES! The graves of thousands be torn, upon the dawn of the eternal night's morn! Whence forth from oblivion do I bring scorn, and now in final chapter, this war is reborn!
It writhes! IT WRITHES! From the bowels of flesh and sinew ripped free, I bring to you a powerful tale, my soliloquy; welcome to your tragedy! The antagonist, you see, comes forth from the depths to thee, behold, mortals.
My MIGHTY GENOBEE!!"
-Vertejaune, The Onslaught of Genobee

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Re: An ode to Genobee

Post by Rising_Dusk » Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:55 pm

I love that last verse so much. Just say it out loud, it rings of epicness.
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Re: An ode to Genobee

Post by SetaSoujirou » Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:21 pm

Akruta wrote: There might bee a few errors so please point them out also sugesstions on how to better it are welcome.
I see what you did thar =P
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