Auros, Essere Aviare

[Evernite.]

Auros
Essere Aviare
Intelligence (Medivh); Hallowed Order


Level 1 Skill:
Desert Storm

• Active. Sends out strong winds in a cone, lifting the desert sands; any enemy caught in the storm will be dealt X damage and have its blind condition extended by Y.

Level 1 Skill:
Bourrasque

• Active. Removes all conditions from enemies in the target area, but damages them for X, also knocking them down for Y for each condition removed that way.

Level 1 Skill:
Phantom Wind

• Active. Whenever the hero becomes afflicted by a condition, it becomes unbreakably invisible for X seconds.

Level 6 Ultimate:
Cyclone

• Active. Forms a vortex around the hero; every second, units caught in its wake will suffer X damage and have their cripple condition extended by Y. Lasts Z seconds.

Note that the ultimate is instant and follows the hero around. And the story will come soon, when I get the inspiration. That's about it... shoot it down.

[Wufei]

Auros
Essere Aviare
Intelligence (Medivh); Hallowed Order


Level 1 Skill:
Desert Storm

• Active. Sends out strong winds in a cone, lifting the desert sands; any enemy caught in the storm will be dealt X damage and have its blind condition extended by Y.
  -Notes: Khamsin Templar detected.

Level 1 Skill:
Bourrasque

• Active. Removes all conditions from enemies in the target area, but damages them for X, also knocking them down for Y for each condition removed that way.
  -Notes: Knockdown is a tough condition to fit into places. It's effectively stun, and stun becomes all sorts of broken when it's greater than 3 seconds.

Level 1 Skill:
Phantom Wind

• Active. Whenever the hero becomes afflicted by a condition, it becomes unbreakably invisible for X seconds.
  -Notes: If you're going to go with a skill like this, you might as well reword it: "Passive: This hero is immune to all conditions." Also, no synergy with other skills.

Level 6 Ultimate:
Cyclone

• Active. Forms a vortex around the hero; every second, units caught in its wake will suffer X damage and have their cripple condition extended by Y. Lasts Z seconds.

-Notes: Ult is random and again, little synergy. Every one of this guy's skills is a nuke with a secondary effect, except for the 3rd skill, which is basically invincibility to all conditional effects.

[Daryll-The-Damned]

I'm gunna agree with all of wufei's comments except one.

Invisiblity != invincibility, even to conditional effects.

Dusk even created a hero that had a skill almost exactly like that, it was a choice of the hero contest winners.

Just wanted to make that clear.